4/16/15

Keeping the Balance

Hello everyone! Thanks for the wonderful feedback on the last caption. Seems like everyone enjoyed the follow-up to "Evelyn's" story. :)

We have another one today. Hope you enjoy it!




11 comments:

  1. if she played her cards right, she could be queen of the commune.

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    1. Better to reign as queen than serve as king? ;)

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  2. Please tell me there will be more to this story. It's pulled me in and I hope there's more?

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    1. Thanks, Knight and Erin! I really enjoyed writing it, so I'm sure there will be more to this story. ;)

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    2. There's a lot of potential here. For example is Mathias using drugs that make Nathan look like a woman or is Mathias telling the truth and Gaia really is turning him into the genuine article?

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  3. Lose your wife or lose your manhood. I hate to break it to you darling but I think you lost them both

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    1. LOL, I think you're right on the money, Jay. The battle is already lost no matter what he does.

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    2. Would Nathan even be able to prove who he is if he left for the outside world?

      Who can blame Sara for being caught up in the cult after seeing the "magic" that has been preformed on her former husbands body?

      Who can blame Matthias for wanting to make Natalie, the most beautiful sister in the commune, his wife, even though she lacks faith,--- for now?

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    3. All excellent questions, Jay. Nathan's world has been irrevocably altered no matter what path he chooses to walk.

      Let's see what happens... ;-)

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    4. Well I absolutely love the "alterations" that have been made thus far. ;-)

      Look forward to more.

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