4/14/15

Lying Low: The Sequel

Howdy, everyone.

Last June, I created a caption series I really loved called "Lying Low." The ending basically begged for a follow-up, but I never got around to it. Luckily, my friend Jay took it upon himself to dream up a fantastic follow-up and posted it in the comment section. I was so enamored with his efforts, that I stole it (with his blessing, of course).

90% of what you're about to read is Jay's creation. I only edited it, and added a few special details of my own. ;)

So! Without further ado, I present the sequel to "Lying Low!" I hope you enjoy it.

(I also included the original two captions, for those who don't remember them)



 






15 comments:

  1. Wow love it! Great use of pictures and I liked your additions.

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    1. "Stay beautiful" You know that line from Nicky has to sting as it creeps into Chris's thoughts at times when he's putting on make-up or slipping on a sexy outfit or skimpy bikini. ;)

      I just now notice the t-girl model tag on this caption and the original. I had no idea and I'm surprised the stunning creature in the first 4 pictures isn't a genetic female. She's been nicknamed The Trap and I can see why. lol

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    2. Haha. Absolutely. And "Stay beautiful" was one of my favorite little lines as well. ;)

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  2. Great follow up and conclusion! Loved the story and excellent use
    of pictures to bring it to life. Awesome work!

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    1. Thanks! I really enjoyed writing it and want to thank Emory for putting my epilogue in a caption. It's funny I thought about making my own caption for this but couldn't find any pictures of the model to use but I was going to use the same pov picture for the end.

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    2. Thanks, Knight! Whenever I see your comments, I always get super proud. You're a master! :)

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  3. and she lived happily every after :)

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    1. Yep... It's a sweet ending, all things considered. ;)

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    2. Of all the protagonists in your captions who's fate is known Evelyn may have the happiest ending. Though I'm sure she regrets Chris didn't "think of a better disguise" knowing there will never be a "next time" to do so. ;)

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    3. I think you're right, Jay. Now he has a disguise for life... but it's still a pretty good life. ;)

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  4. Great caption all around! I really liked the ending

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    1. Thanks you. I debated whether to have Chris end up as Nicky's girl forever maybe even more than that or allow Chris to live out his dream albeit his view of the ocean as he lays on the beach has two more obstructions than he envisioned and then one less :)

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    2. Thanks, Erin! Yeah, Jay's ending is pretty much perfect. ;)

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  5. This is a really really nice series, I enjoyed reading it so much :) Keep up the good work

    Zoli

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    1. Glad you enjoyed it, Zoli. Stay tuned! ;)

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