Hello! I'm Emory, a trans woman writing transgender comics and caption stories.
My work usually explores "realistic" scenarios, although occasionally they involve super science or magic.
This is neat and creative and I'm happy you're experimenting with formats. Ultimately though I feel like this particular story might have been better told in a more traditional caption style. I enjoyed reading it, but more in an intellectual way than a "wow this is hot" way. I feel like an article-style caption is really good at portraying large, societal changes, but isn't the best way to tell a story about one person.
Wow, I would love to be on the jury!!! Great cap!!!
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Thank you!
DeleteI would love to be her! Stay as a female and enjoy your new life as a female lawyer! Zoe
ReplyDeleteShe doesn't have much choice, Zoe!
DeleteThis is neat and creative and I'm happy you're experimenting with formats.
ReplyDeleteUltimately though I feel like this particular story might have been better told in a more traditional caption style.
I enjoyed reading it, but more in an intellectual way than a "wow this is hot" way.
I feel like an article-style caption is really good at portraying large, societal changes, but isn't the best way to tell a story about one person.
Thanks, although I really enjoyed this style. The sequel is told in a more traditional way. :)
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