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Alter, Part 2

Thanks for the congrats and comments on the last caption! Glad you guys are liking this series so far.

Here's a three-panel continuation to hopefully make your Monday a little brighter. 

There's more of Brett and Kayla's story to come. :)








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7 comments:

  1. Kitty St. ClareDecember 12, 2016 at 8:23 AM

    This series is really good! I can't wait to see the rest!

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    1. Emory AhlbergDecember 13, 2016 at 1:54 AM

      Thanks so much, Kitty. :D

      I can't wait for you to see it, either. I think you're really going to like it.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 12, 2016 at 1:33 PM

    The story is progressing and playing out very nicely. The way you switch from past information and current time is very smooth and easy to follow. Can't wait to see the next chapter.

    Also,

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    1. Emory AhlbergDecember 13, 2016 at 1:55 AM

      Thanks, Anon! Balancing the two narratives was a little tricky, but worth it. ;)

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  3. JayDecember 12, 2016 at 5:09 PM

    Oh Brett, Brett, Brett Brett, don't you remember the letter? Kayla can hear you all the time. You really think the nose job is the last surgery she has scheduled? Maybe after that Kayla will give you a weekend or two a beach weekend getaway with Mr Donaldson and the only thing she packs will be a skimpy bikini.

    Great series and congrats on 100!!

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    1. Emory AhlbergDecember 13, 2016 at 1:56 AM

      Thanks a lot, Jay!

      Poor Brett, eh? So naive... Kayla is determined to have her way, and so far he's not been much use in stopping her. What makes him think that will change? ;)

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  4. SydneyDecember 19, 2016 at 6:08 AM

    Oh, I am loving this! =)

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