4/14/15

Lying Low: The Sequel

Howdy, everyone.

Last June, I created a caption series I really loved called "Lying Low." The ending basically begged for a follow-up, but I never got around to it. Luckily, my friend Jay took it upon himself to dream up a fantastic follow-up and posted it in the comment section. I was so enamored with his efforts, that I stole it (with his blessing, of course).

90% of what you're about to read is Jay's creation. I only edited it, and added a few special details of my own. ;)

So! Without further ado, I present the sequel to "Lying Low!" I hope you enjoy it.

(I also included the original two captions, for those who don't remember them)



 






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16 comments:

  1. JayApril 14, 2015 at 2:24 PM

    Wow love it! Great use of pictures and I liked your additions.

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    1. JayApril 14, 2015 at 6:27 PM

      "Stay beautiful" You know that line from Nicky has to sting as it creeps into Chris's thoughts at times when he's putting on make-up or slipping on a sexy outfit or skimpy bikini. ;)

      I just now notice the t-girl model tag on this caption and the original. I had no idea and I'm surprised the stunning creature in the first 4 pictures isn't a genetic female. She's been nicknamed The Trap and I can see why. lol

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    2. Emory AhlbergApril 15, 2015 at 12:37 AM

      Haha. Absolutely. And "Stay beautiful" was one of my favorite little lines as well. ;)

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  2. HrdknightApril 14, 2015 at 4:45 PM

    Great follow up and conclusion! Loved the story and excellent use
    of pictures to bring it to life. Awesome work!

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    1. JayApril 14, 2015 at 9:10 PM

      Thanks! I really enjoyed writing it and want to thank Emory for putting my epilogue in a caption. It's funny I thought about making my own caption for this but couldn't find any pictures of the model to use but I was going to use the same pov picture for the end.

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    2. Emory AhlbergApril 15, 2015 at 12:47 AM

      Thanks, Knight! Whenever I see your comments, I always get super proud. You're a master! :)

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  3. AnonymousApril 14, 2015 at 6:04 PM

    and she lived happily every after :)

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    1. Emory AhlbergApril 15, 2015 at 12:37 AM

      Yep... It's a sweet ending, all things considered. ;)

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    2. JayApril 15, 2015 at 3:39 PM

      Of all the protagonists in your captions who's fate is known Evelyn may have the happiest ending. Though I'm sure she regrets Chris didn't "think of a better disguise" knowing there will never be a "next time" to do so. ;)

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    3. Emory AhlbergApril 16, 2015 at 12:44 PM

      I think you're right, Jay. Now he has a disguise for life... but it's still a pretty good life. ;)

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  4. AnonymousApril 14, 2015 at 6:17 PM

    Great caption all around! I really liked the ending

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    1. JayApril 14, 2015 at 9:24 PM

      Thanks you. I debated whether to have Chris end up as Nicky's girl forever maybe even more than that or allow Chris to live out his dream albeit his view of the ocean as he lays on the beach has two more obstructions than he envisioned and then one less :)

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    2. Emory AhlbergApril 15, 2015 at 12:38 AM

      Thanks, Erin! Yeah, Jay's ending is pretty much perfect. ;)

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  5. zoligomystApril 15, 2015 at 6:04 AM

    This is a really really nice series, I enjoyed reading it so much :) Keep up the good work

    Zoli

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  6. DiviJune 8, 2021 at 4:49 AM

    What a lovely series! I love it when the story has realism. Not that anything like this would happen in a normal world, but at least it is theoretically possible :) Those *click*-and-you-suddenly-swap-bodies-captions just feel off.
    And you are very good at building the captions and finding the right pics. Doing the little extra work on the design really makes a caption rise several levels.

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